Both reading and listening are talking about how government are trying a way to replace automobile main source of power.
The lecturer cast doubt on reading passage by stating that it is too optimistic.
First, the author states that we can replace gasoline-distal fuel with Hydrogen can be easily came from different materials.
The lecturer says that hydrogen based is not easily available, liquid hydrogen is artificial substance
Second, the author says that hydrogen based fuel will help pollution because they are producing carbon dioxide and it harms the environment, the lecturer refute this. The lecturer states that still they are coal and oil that will pollute the air.
Moreover, the reading passage hydrogen-based fuel is attractive because it will save money in other words the hydrogen based fuel only half of the gasoline based. The lecturer cast doubt on this by saying it is not cost savingat all. Hydrogen-based fuel is expensive and it needs platinum with shape to be produced
Essay evaluation report
how government are trying
how governments are trying
we can replace gasoline-distal fuel with Hydrogen can be easily came from different materials.
we can replace gasoline-distal fuel with Hydrogen which can be easily coming from different materials.
Sentence: The lecturer cast doubt on this by saying it is not cost savingat all.
Error: savingat Suggestion: saving at
flaws:
No. of Words: 162 250
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 9 12
No. of Words: 162 250
No. of Characters: 818 1200
No. of Different Words: 95 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.568 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.049 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.638 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.807 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.436 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.692 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... liquid hydrogen is artificial substance Second, the author says that hydrogen ba...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'talking about', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270114942529 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.218390804598 0.158904122519 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0747126436782 0.0723426182421 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459770114943 0.0435111971325 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0459770114943 0.0277247811725 166% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103448275862 0.128828473217 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0689655172414 0.0370669169778 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.69147128542 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114942528736 0.0208969081088 55% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0977011494253 0.128158765124 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0287356321839 0.0158828679856 181% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.0114777025283 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1003.0 1645.83664459 61% => OK
No of words: 162.0 271.125827815 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.19135802469 6.08160592843 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.04852973271 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376543209877 0.374372842146 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.283950617284 0.287516216867 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197530864198 0.187439937562 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111111111111 0.113142543107 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69147128542 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 50.0545670154 53.8517498576 93% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 20.25 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7102817448 49.3711431718 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.375 132.220823453 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 21.7502111507 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.878197800319 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 48.6450617284 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.42592592593 1.90840788429 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511728249578 0.549887131256 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127664134035 0.142949733639 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0928646596806 0.0787303798458 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.824372801603 0.631733273073 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196542672289 0.139662658121 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244359130193 0.266732575781 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114165773321 0.103435571967 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.162126112199 0.414875509568 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112098146207 0.0530846634433 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261139731397 0.40443939384 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12241057956 0.0528353158467 232% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Not in a correct format.
The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%) but more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
http://www.testbig.com/users/toeflwritingmaster
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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