TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for

The lecture and reading are about effect of no or less reading literature,novels, plays, and poems on people especially young. Author says this have a bad affects on young people and cause some our mind abilities such as imagination weakened. She also says it also is a due to people spend their free time on less cultured sources such as TV and cause less reader be available to new writes.
First, reading says the best sources which help people develops their knowledge, mind abilities and compassion sens for others are literature. Professor says there are so many other type books such as since fiction, history and political which are so many other books have high quality content which can help a person improve his personality.
Second, now days people prefer to spend more time on worthless sources such as watching a TV shows or reading a web pages which contain less cultural content. professor says that now days world has changed and so many other sources can be as useful as literature such as a good movie or music.
Finally, author says there are so many capable writer which by their writing readers decreasing, they have not enough importunately to published their books. Professor says some modern literature failure to comply with standards and are a author fault so understanding is so hard.

Votes
Average: 4 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...lecture and reading are about effect of no or less reading literature,novels, play...
^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , novels
... effect of no or less reading literature,novels, plays, and poems on people especially ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e our mind abilities such as imagination , spend free time on less cultured source...
^^
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r reading a web pages which contain less cultural content. Finally, author says...
^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'writers'?
Suggestion: writers
..., author says there are so many capable writer which by their writing readers decreasi...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 22.412803532 27% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 30.3222958057 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 1373.03311258 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 125.0 270.72406181 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.136 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 4.04702891845 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70172532429 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 145.348785872 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.540411800872 126% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 419.366225166 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.3291151016 49.2860985944 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.4 110.228320801 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244240175906 0.272083759551 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145116622832 0.0996497079465 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085994224082 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14445565827 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641573727371 0.0443174109184 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 63.6247240618 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.