Both the reading passages and lecturer are talking about Jane Austin. The lecturer cast doubt on claims that mentioned in Reading passage. The lecturer mentions she was most famous English novelist.
The reading says that the portrait is for Jane Austin and her relative gave the permission as a permission to access portrait of Jane Austin after a several decades. The portrait was long time after her dearth but her relatives say that it is her when she was teenager.The lecturer claims that it is not her portrait, because they gave it in 1882 and it was 70 years after her death.
Secondly, the author states that scheme clearly like her face, her eyebrows and lips.The lecturer debuts this by saying she had so many relatives in relevant age Marylin is one of them that could be her portrait instead of Jane.
The author mentions Ozias Humphreg that Jane Austin family would hire for portrait painting.The lecturer refutes that by saying that the portrait was sold by the man named Ozias Humpherg when she was 27 Justin was older than what portrait tells about her age.
Essay evaluation report
The lecturer cast doubt on claims that mentioned in Reading passage.
The lecturer cast doubt on claims that are mentioned in Reading passage.
The lecturer cast doubt on claims mentioned in Reading passage.
she was most famous English novelist.
she was the most famous English novelist.
flaws:
No. of Words: 189 250
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 12
No. of Words: 189 250
No. of Characters: 873 1200
No. of Different Words: 101 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.708 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.619 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.131 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.194 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.489 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.346 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... she was most famous English novelist. The reading says that the portrait is for J...
^^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decade'?
Suggestion: decade
...portrait of Jane Austin after a several decades. The portrait was long time after her d...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...of Jane Austin after a several decades. The portrait was long time after her dearth...
^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ay that it is her when she was teenager.The lecturer claims that it is not her port...
^^^
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ay that it is her when she was teenager.The lecturer claims that it is not her port...
^^^
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ly like her face, her eyebrows and lips.The lecturer debuts this by saying she had ...
^^^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...family would hire for portrait painting.The lecturer refutes that by saying that th...
^^^
Line 6, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...family would hire for portrait painting.The lecturer refutes that by saying that th...
^^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat by saying that the portrait was sold by the man named Ozias Humpherg when she...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301020408163 0.261695866417 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.15306122449 0.158904122519 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0561224489796 0.0723426182421 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030612244898 0.0435111971325 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.102040816327 0.0277247811725 368% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.128828473217 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0255102040816 0.0370669169778 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.29725338322 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00510204081633 0.0208969081088 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0765306122449 0.128158765124 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0102040816327 0.0158828679856 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255102040816 0.0114777025283 222% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1081.0 1645.83664459 66% => OK
No of words: 186.0 271.125827815 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81182795699 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.04852973271 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344086021505 0.374372842146 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247311827957 0.287516216867 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182795698925 0.187439937562 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0537634408602 0.113142543107 48% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.29725338322 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 145.348785872 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.539623497131 103% => OK
Word variations: 48.7719940269 53.8517498576 91% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0529801325 54% => OK
Sentence length: 26.5714285714 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.0550830774 49.3711431718 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.428571429 132.220823453 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 21.7502111507 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.878197800319 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.39072847682 265% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.3026113671 50.5018328374 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.64285714286 1.90840788429 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542957223016 0.549887131256 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165955085747 0.142949733639 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0920328068606 0.0787303798458 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.758234255262 0.631733273073 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175444793866 0.139662658121 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.301046053461 0.266732575781 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978053130082 0.103435571967 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310518885228 0.414875509568 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0450501368619 0.0530846634433 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375988138616 0.40443939384 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649311118494 0.0528353158467 123% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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