TPO-12 - Integrated Writing Task Jane Austen (1775-1817) is one of the most famous of all English novelists, and today her novels are more popular than ever, with several recently adapted as Hollywood movies. But we do not have many records of what she lo

The reading states about Jane Austen portrait which recently came up for sale by one of her family members and the author believes that there are several reasons that support the idea that she is the subject in this portrait. However, the professor explains that those evidences hardly approve the subject and he refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article claims that Austen's family accepted it as a portrait of Austen because they permit to use it in one of her letters. In contrary, the lecturer opposes this idea and explains that the date of this permission is 70 years after the Austen death. So it is expected that her family can't have an accurate image of her face and their permission is not a proper reason to support the idea.
Second, the text states that Austen's face in this portrait is obviously similar to Cassendra's sketch as an accepted painting of Austen. Conversely, the professor opposes this point and explains that while the portrait is of an teenage girl, it can be a picture of one of her relatives. It is reported that Austen had some relatives who has same age as Austen on that period.
Finally, the reading claims that there are some evidences that it was painted when Austen was a teenager. However, the speaker refutes this opinion by stating that recent researches about the date of selling of the portrait blank canvas shows that this action was happened when Austen was so older than the age that depicted in that portrait.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
... portrait of Austen because they permit to use it in one of her letters. In contrary, ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... explains that while the portrait is of an teenage girl, it can be a picture of on...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 270.72406181 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85992217899 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5798281592 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501945525292 0.540411800872 93% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8191923176 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.9 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.50389343484 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219493214236 0.0996497079465 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109826766654 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325540438711 0.162205337803 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041292780308 0.0443174109184 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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