TPO 26
In the REading passage, the author claims that the zebra mussel, a shelfish species living in freshwater, presentes serious problems for the freshwater fishes by pointing out three reasons od support. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and stataes that indeed, there are some solutions to control the spreading the zebra mussel population. He points out some evidence to refute the ideas mentioned in the reading.
At first, the author argues that having conveyed the zebra mussle by the ships, they assist spreading() its population across new rigions in the United states. The lecturer brings up the fact that it is true since the ships' routs are passing through the freshwater. Actually, the fresh water is the most favorable envirnoment for reproducing the sebra mussle. Consequently, if they change their path to the ocean, the zebra mussle will not spread since they cannot survive in salt water; thus, they become enable to colonize in other areas.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that the zebra mussle population can enormously increasine due to absence of any predator. On the other hand, the professor disputes this point by clarifying the fact that although, it is true at the begining of their colonization, there are some other species which are seeking to find new food resourses. For instance, the zibra mussle can be accounted as good food for birds. Therefore, they cannot be dominate in their new habitat for a long time.
Finally, the author asserts that the zebra mussle causes a substantial drop in the overl fish population. The lecturer, though, dismisses this idea by subscribing the fact that the decline occur in the populatin of plankton eaters fish. As a matter of fact, the zebra mussel produces nutritions in their habitat which provides suitable environment for nurishing kind of other fish speacies in the bottom of water.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a matter of fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11214953271 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60833440188 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 419.366225166 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.031191587 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.214285714 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06452816374 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334030363075 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103213583545 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065560046065 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188338578621 0.162205337803 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248393778498 0.0443174109184 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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