TPO 3 - Integrated:
Rembrandt portrait -the woman with fur collar-
In the reading, the author claims that the famous portrait in Rembrandt collection, which depicted the woman's face with fur collar, was eliminated from the official catalog of Rembrandt paintings in the 1930s due to 3 problems regarding it. However, finding all the ideas questionable and plausible, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in the text and brings some evidences to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that there is a lack of congruity in the woman's dress as the linen cap is suitable for a savant while the costly coat with fur collar is appropriate for a noble individual. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that the recent scrutinizing of this pigments in the portrait has revealed the fur collar is not the part of the original painting. Indeed, this piece was added deliberately on the top of the original art virtually 100 years after it had been drawn. She stated that perhaps someone thought that if the appearance of the aristocratic woman seems better, the value of the portrait will be raise.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that the shadows and lights are not coordinated perfectly because of entirely bright face of the woman. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes this point by clarifying the fact that in the Rembrandt original painting, the color was simple without dark fur that reflected the light. Consequently, removing the fur, we can see that the combination of shadows and lights is perfect such as others Rembrandts' artwork.
Finally, the author asserts applying the glued pieces of wood instead of only the one wooden panel as the last point for supporting this portrait does not attribute to Rembrandt. The lecturer, thought, dismisses it by pointing out that having added the fur collar, that person had no other choice but attaching additional piece of wood in order to increase the value of painting. Furthermore, another crucial point is that according to the recent examination the wood of this portrait is the same as another prominent painting ascribing Rembrandt, the self-portrait with
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the reading, the author claims that t...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he idea that the recent scrutinizing of this pigments in the portrait has revealed t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and lights are not coordinated perfectly because of entirely bright face of the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 346.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0289017341 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70730119654 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 145.348785872 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563583815029 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 21.2450331126 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.5332095285 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 110.228320801 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 21.698381199 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335803993886 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112325527091 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848127568381 0.0662205650399 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198951372222 0.162205337803 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451120674016 0.0443174109184 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 63.6247240618 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.498013245 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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