TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would

The reading and the lecture have opposed opinions about the possibility of establishing a permanent stations on Venus. The lecture casts doubts on all the reasons mentioned in the reading.

First, the reading states that the pressure on the surface of Venus is so powerful, ten time like earth, that any spacecraft would crushed immediately when landing on the surface. The lecturer refutes this claim by saying that a floating station would enable us to avoid this problem. The station will float on high latitude that the pressure at this height will be nearly equal to the pressure on Earth.

Second, the reading states that Venus does not contain water reservoirs which is necessary to any life. The lecturer rebuts this claim. He suggests that the chemical that are found on the surface and the atmosphere of Venus could be used to produce water through some chemical operations.

Finally, the reading states that the sunlight is very weak on Venus, and hardly there will be enough light that needed for the availability of life. The lecturer argues against this claim. He explains that at high latitude the sunlight is stronger than on the surface of the planet. It is possible to use to avoid the thickness of the atmosphere that weaken the light. They could use some cells to store the light which penetrates the atmosphere and the light reflected from the clouds.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'crush'
Suggestion: crush
...e like earth, that any spacecraft would crushed immediately when landing on the surface...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 302, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...urface of the planet. It is possible to use to avoid the thickness of the atmospher...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95708154506 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42539779767 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519313304721 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8704114555 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8461538462 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06452816374 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345501201512 0.272083759551 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10936310731 0.0996497079465 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678931366564 0.0662205650399 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196251344027 0.162205337803 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05289998655 0.0443174109184 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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