The article states that it would not be possible to maintain a permanent presence on Venus and provide three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that it might be possible to maintain presence on Venus and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the article claims that atmospheric pressure on Venus is much higher than on Earth. The professor refutes the point by saying that 50 kilometer above of the surface of Venus is possible to stay their.He states that the atmospheric pressure above 50 kilometer of Venus is same as pressure on Earth. So it is possible to stay on Venus atmosphere by using gas bloom.
Second,the reading states that there are no reservations of water on Venus surface and it is not feasible to provide daily supply of water from Earth to Venus. However the professor says that there is further solution for water. According to the professor there is presence of carbon dioxide and sulphuric acid. The chemical reaction between them generates water and other gases, this water is useful for drinking.
Third,the article says that very little sunlight reaches to the surface of Venus and due to this the solar panel cannot be generate more electricity from little sunlight.The professor opposes this point by explaining that there is feasible to generate electricity on Venus. The professor further support this statement by saying that above 50 kilometer of Venus surface there is less dark clouds, so there is source to get more sunlight from less dark clouds and by putting solar panel we can generate more electricity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...face of Venus is possible to stay their.He states that the atmospheric pressure ab...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
... that the atmospheric pressure above 50 kilometer of Venus is same as pressure on Earth. ...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...atmosphere by using gas bloom. Second,the reading states that there are no reserv...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly supply of water from Earth to Venus. However the professor says that there is furthe...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...s water is useful for drinking. Third,the article says that very little sunlight ...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e more electricity from little sunlight.The professor opposes this point by explain...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
... this statement by saying that above 50 kilometer of Venus surface there is less dark clo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270462633452 0.261695866417 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.142348754448 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113879003559 0.0723426182421 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0320284697509 0.0435111971325 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0213523131673 0.0277247811725 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163701067616 0.128828473217 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0213523131673 0.0370669169778 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54761903292 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0391459074733 0.0208969081088 187% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0818505338078 0.128158765124 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0142348754448 0.0158828679856 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0114777025283 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1572.0 1645.83664459 96% => OK
No of words: 261.0 271.125827815 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02298850575 6.08160592843 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383141762452 0.374372842146 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295019157088 0.287516216867 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2030651341 0.187439937562 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0996168582375 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54761903292 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.539623497131 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.9023660056 53.8517498576 76% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7272727273 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2778571234 49.3711431718 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 132.220823453 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 21.7502111507 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.878197800319 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.39072847682 206% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.2291884361 50.5018328374 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.32727272727 1.90840788429 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.682505255878 0.549887131256 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.212694140724 0.142949733639 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.124066288048 0.0787303798458 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.698289687601 0.631733273073 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152640714789 0.139662658121 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.347701010744 0.266732575781 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118163633213 0.103435571967 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368931496792 0.414875509568 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0126640380648 0.0530846634433 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.496977772379 0.40443939384 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171274756594 0.0528353158467 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.26048565121 70% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.49668874172 114% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.62251655629 110% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.