TPO-41 - Integrated Writing Task Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harm

The article claims that imposing new regulations to control coal ashes can have several disadvantages and provide three reasons of support. In contrast, the professor express that we surely need to new strict rules in this matter, hence she refutes each of the author's reasons.

First, the reading mentions that we now have some regulation for this subject such as the use liner and landfill, so it is not necessarily to new rules. Conversely, the professor says that old regulations are not sufficient. In addition, she states that the companies use of landfills that they are not suitable and lead harmful chemicals to enter underground water. However, new sites have not such as this problem.

Second, the passage asserts that new strict rules can discourage companies to recycle coal ash. On contrary, the speaker opposes this point by expressing an example of certain exotic material, which was handled and recycled proper. So, the strict laws can not negative effects on recycling process and companies tend to do it.

Finally, the text states that new regulations will increase the price of products, which is not desirable for people. In contrast, the professor express that imposing strict rules can increase the price, while it is not big and people will not notice it. ,

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Average: 7.3 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... not big and people will not notice it. ,
^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not big and people will not notice it. ,
^^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243697478992 0.261695866417 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.142857142857 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105042016807 0.0723426182421 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0672268907563 0.0435111971325 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0378151260504 0.0277247811725 136% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113445378151 0.128828473217 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0252100840336 0.0370669169778 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59605003652 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0252100840336 0.0208969081088 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0882352941176 0.128158765124 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252100840336 0.0158828679856 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00840336134454 0.0114777025283 73% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1292.0 1645.83664459 79% => OK
No of words: 212.0 271.125827815 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09433962264 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04852973271 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38679245283 0.374372842146 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316037735849 0.287516216867 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193396226415 0.187439937562 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132075471698 0.113142543107 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59605003652 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 55.3406688426 53.8517498576 103% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0529801325 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6666666667 21.7502111507 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8096562316 49.3711431718 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 132.220823453 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 21.7502111507 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.878197800319 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 49.2704402516 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.54237288136 1.90840788429 81% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.561600484249 0.549887131256 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102423849098 0.142949733639 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0985668689896 0.0787303798458 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571128935709 0.631733273073 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212591001982 0.139662658121 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.226875401401 0.266732575781 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104326334049 0.103435571967 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288273965557 0.414875509568 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.032624702658 0.0530846634433 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371840558804 0.40443939384 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266319818326 0.0528353158467 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.49668874172 143% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.1766004415 94% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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