TPO 44

Essay topics:

TPO 44

According to the reading, the discovered silver coin in the state of Main is fake and does not belonged to European travelers called the Norse; however, the lecturer casts doubt on the claims made in the reading.
First, the reading states that the coin has been found far away from the Norse site; therefor, it cannot be attributed to them. on the contrary, the lecturer states that native Americans used to travel a lot, so it is possible that they brought the coin and other objects (which has been found at to far locations).
Secondly, the reading asserts that no other coins have been discovered in Norse site. in contrast, the lecturer notes that the Norse did not choose the site as their permanent residence. in fact, they returned to Europe, so it is probable that they have packed their stuff including all their silver coins.
Finally, the reading contended that unlike Europeans, native north Americans did not recognized the coins as money. The lecturer refutes this argument by explaining that although native north Americans were not familiar with the concept of money, they might trade things in exchange for objects which are aesthetically appealing like these silver coins.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
... the state of Main is fake and does not belonged to European travelers called the Norse;...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...refor, it cannot be attributed to them. on the contrary, the lecturer states that ...
^^
Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd other objects which has been found at to far locations. Secondly, the reading...
^^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ins have been discovered in Norse site. in contrast, the lecturer notes that the N...
^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... the site as their permanent residence. in fact, they returned to Europe, so it is...
^^
Line 4, column 86, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'recognize'
Suggestion: recognize
...ropeans, native north Americans did not recognized the coins as money. The lecturer refute...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, in contrast, in fact, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 199.0 270.72406181 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40374403887 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577889447236 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.564097776 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 7.06452816374 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459251303114 0.272083759551 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199105999871 0.0996497079465 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949467632251 0.0662205650399 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253733944211 0.162205337803 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665106061502 0.0443174109184 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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