TPO 7 Task 1

Essay topics

The article states that ecocertification of wood products in the USA will not attract companies and consumers attention becuase of three reasons. The professor, on the other hand, disagrees with this claim, believing that ecocertifcation is a novel idea which both the companies and costumers prefer of having products having ecocertification labels.

First of all, it is mentioned in the article that American consumers distrust advertised products, since most of them are low quality. This leads to the fact that people do not care about the certified or uncertified wood products as they do not trust all the products advertised. The professor debunks this claim, saying that American costumers, indeed, rely on the products which are advertised by an independent organisation and because the ecocertification is planned to be issued by an independent international institution, the American costumers are going to trust the label.

Secondly, the author expresses that due to the higher price of ecocertified wood products than unecocertified ones, people are reluctant to buy them. It is true that every one likes to buy cheap products, not only Americans. However, professors mentions that American people tend to buy the cheaper brand if the other one is much more expensieve. This means that when the price difference is only 5 percent, Americans consider other factors rather than the price. They like to preserve and protect their environment and specially their forests, therefore they are going to purchase ecocertified wood as they are environmentally friendly.

Finally, according to the text, the American companies do not proceed the ecocertification as they cannot sell their products abroad. The lecture opposes this point of view, mentioning that the competition between foreign companies is much more important than attracting foreign consumers. If the American companies are not applying for ecocertification, the well-known international compaines will dominate the domestic market. Hence, all Americans will purchase ecocertified wood products from international brands than buying from domestic companies.

Votes
Average: 5.2 (2 votes)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, first of all, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 321.0 270.72406181 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66043613707 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20697711341 2.5805825403 124% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3201992144 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.785714286 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06452816374 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.2367328918 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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