I do not agree to the point, violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. Criminals are not influenced from TV and movies. Criminals are mentally unstable, they need help, they need love. Every person should take steps to help people in need. Your small step could save you and your family. Think about it, why would any sane person do such thing?
I live in North America, recently, lot of violent incidents happened. One common thread between all the criminals, they all mentally unstable and required help. Not all mental diseases are same, there are mainly two types. People who born with and people who are brain-washed to believe in false image of the society. Later ones are more inclined to do criminal acts. People who watch violent movies and play violent games are not directly connected to the criminal activities.
Lots of people in society are living virtual life. Not many people care about what is happening around them. I think everyone should be concerned and aware. If you think, crimes are not happening near me and I am safe, then you are mistaken. In today's world humanity is fading away. We see old lady having trouble picking her groceries and what we do? Take pictures, really? Our hands should raise to help, not to make fun.
In conclusion, I think TV and movies do not increase crime in the society. It is everyone duty to help humanity and spread love.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211155378486 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.219123505976 0.158761421928 138% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0637450199203 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438247011952 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0916334661355 0.0685040099705 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0796812749004 0.118717715034 67% => OK
Participles: 0.0438247011952 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.27004252803 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0278884462151 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0478087649402 0.0887237588012 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199203187251 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119521912351 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1208.0 2387.08602151 51% => OK
No of words: 217.0 408.028673835 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5668202765 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.48200974243 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.276497695853 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.175115207373 0.251872472559 70% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142857142857 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691244239631 0.112833075102 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27004252803 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63133640553 0.524397521467 120% => OK
Word variations: 65.5848179259 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 12.7647058824 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4487747919 48.84282405 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0588235294 120.699889404 59% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 20.5533526081 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 0.644075263715 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 30.2762266197 45.7405998639 66% => OK
Elegance: 0.943820224719 1.45489161554 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259614695006 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0443922191105 0.103427244359 43% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0534327278477 0.0752933317313 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.426417652363 0.497263757937 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131594240061 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832180909602 0.114077575197 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746503441929 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.181468714854 0.336927656856 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0298495993516 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181410479624 0.210909579961 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731902117737 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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