In recent years, whether the trend of eating fast food sparked heated debate. Although such an issue is contested by many, it is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that fast food is very harmful to children, and I will elaborate in this essay.
To begin with, there are several reasons why children like to eat fast food snacks more than homemade meals. One of them is that fast food is available easily, quickly and at a cheap rate also, so most of the children preferred fast food more. It doesn’t take much time to prepare as compared to home-cooked food. For example, If a person wants to eat a burger and if he wants to make it at home, it takes much more time, so he will prefer to eat in shops rather than at home. The second reason is nowadays most of the parents are engaged in their work, so they also have no time to take attention to children’s nutrition, and it affects children’s eating habits.
On the other hand, there are many demerits of excel eating fast food. It impacts the physical health of children’s bodies such as obesity, high blood pressure, high level of cholesterol, heart disease and many more. The high level of calories and fat is very harmful to health. According to the research conducted by the University of America, 79% of children aged between 11-17 years eats junk food an average four times a week.
In conclusion, According to the above discussion, it can be concluded that junk food is harmful for children and adults also. So we have to give attention to children’s nutrition levels.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...food is harmful for children and adults also. So we have to give attention to childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77429469126 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6337549436 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334777389668 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12107431266 0.0925447433944 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793192983988 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193549775336 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422708955212 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 61.0 Out of 90
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