The claim that animals have "rights" has been subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
many people believe that zoos are helping animals. zoos are actually of immense help to animals which are on the verge of extinction For instance, tiger which are only found in India were nearly extinct ,as they were hunted by hunters. By keeping them in zoos, it actually saved this beautiful specie.Thus , zoos are actually helping our animals.
On the other hand, zoos maybe hurting some animals. some species of animals, particularly birds cannot live to their full potential when kept in zoos. For example, most parrots kept in zoos try to flee, as they are not very happy inside a cage.
this has led some people to think that keeping animals in zoos is violating animal right ,and therefore zoos should be banned completely. However, I believe that zoos can actually help lot of animals such as those who are left very few. Beside this, Scientists can experiment on some species by watching them closely in zoos, and this promote good continuation of the specie on earth.
In my opinion zoos are actually helping animals such as tigers and many others, and zoos are a great place to see, therefore it shouldn’t be banned.
In conclusion, zoos are helping animals and they should not be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84057971014 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42763231743 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1738904671 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280146872055 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128989965483 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971003473214 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187914072196 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731653867164 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.1260098522 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 55.0591133005 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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