Does Television remove our loneliness or not?
Different people have different opinion about removing loneliness by watching television. I shall be discussing about my perception about the removal of feeling alone with the help of television.
Firstly, I believe, watching television plays a vital role to get rid of the feeling of being alone by occupying your mind. For example, you can engage your mind with some informative programmes that provide you some up to date information.
Secondly, there are so many entertaining programmes that are telecast and we are able to spend our boring time by watching different comedy shows. Watching such a comedy show always help to provided a great company at the time of loneliness. For instance, the Indian TV comedy show “The Kapil show” has been providing entertainment for hundreds of audiences and make them happy.
However, there are some people who do not believe that television is the best key to eliminate loneliness. They probably consider that there are so many other things to keep loneliness away such as participating in sports, travelling in new places to explore new things.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that television is the master key to remove the feeling of the isolation and it also assist to keep our mind busy .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: assists
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 205.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13658536585 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83603600082 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.9852037723 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.3 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.25397266985 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183298448723 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068454464736 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667260769578 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102216168603 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069930369826 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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