In less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade, discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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In less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade, discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

The important of in less developed countries, tourism has developed significantly in the last decade which was always debatable has now become more controversal. The substantial influence of tourism has developed significantly in the last decade has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. It can be agreed that tourism developed quickly in last decade helps in development in tourism as a key of economy.

At the outset, there are numerous reason why tuorism developed quickely in developed countries but the most conspicious on stem's from the fact that under developed countries tuorism helps to increase variety of services like hotel, transport, restaurant and entertainment. As an illustration, tourism under developed countries helps to increase number of job and development of infrastructure such as due to help of tourism an indian actor salman khan got a job as a directiing manager of tourism board in nepal. It is benificial for job oppoturnities. In addittion, tuorism helps in finincial growth of country. Thus, tourism under developed country helps in to control pollution.

Neverthless, there remain same drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of under developed country tourism is developing day by day but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that it is harmful to the countory. For instance it will provide negative effect to country for e.g loss of culture, change in lifestyel, and change in language and costumes. Furthermore, tourism under developed country may increase crime rate snd drug addiction.

From what has been discussed above it can be concluded that the impact of tourism under developed country is prominent, although the way of tourism under developed countries may increase the thieves which may affect whole country and lead to finincial crisis should be well handeled.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98977076599 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.9942409902 50.4703680194 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371557715425 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161436419039 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118911906793 0.071462118173 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246229480315 0.151781067708 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125272075012 0.0609392437508 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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