Many people think that successful people’s accomplishments depend on the regions they come from, while other people think that it doesn’t matter where a person comes from, if that person has the will to succeed, he/she will triumph. What do you think?.
It is aptly said that "If there is a will, there is a way". Anyone can be successful and can write his or her name on the pages of the Golden History. In following paragraphs, I will discuss whether region from where a person comes can contribute to their success or not.
To start with, if a person wants to gain certain achievements, the only way I feel is the sheer hard work, perseverance, and faith no matter from where he or she is coming. For instance, the business tycoon of the India Dhirubhai Ambani was from the lower middle-class family of a small village of the Gujarat state. Unavailability of the resources and development did not hinder his success. However, once becoming successful, he developed his village so that youngsters do not face the difficulties he had faced.
On the other hand, the environment affects the person's overall development. For instance, teachers, parents, and neighbors definitely reflect in the behavior of an individual. In addition to this, availability of the new technology certainly helps people to move forward and keep pace with the world. For example, there are certain athletes in India who don't get proper training and environment or equipment can not compete with the international sports persons.
To wrap up, I feel that right combination of person's will, hard-work, environment to grow and the availability of the opportunities are essential for success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08936170213 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02939873196 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4918468627 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230461443438 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751398881656 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696156378881 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124258590539 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612453425844 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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