50)Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Life is like a board game. Players put down money and take a chance at either winning a jackpot or losing everything. There is both an element of luck and skill involved, but essentially it all comes down to what you are willing to risk. Risk taking is the key to success and life becomes more interesting. I believe in taking risks and try new things in life.
First of all, self-believing and daily motivation/ inspiration is very essential while taking a risk. Attitude is everything, especially when you are trying new things. There will be always pros and cons when you choose to do risky wor...
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Some ideal points. No error…
Some ideal points. No error analysis found. Taking risks is mandatory and nothing more can be done. We only know how to learn from experience to minimize the risk as much as possible. we become what we behold.
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