70 Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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70)Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the automobile has caused serious problems. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Automobile is one of the most remarkable inventions in this world like internet and technological advancement. There are many advantages and disadvantages regarding automobiles. Automobiles have become part of our lives. In my opinion definitely automobile has improved our modern life.

First of all, in this highly competitive world, always people wants to do their job as quick as possible to achieve success and fame. Automobile makes their job easy by transporting people from one place to another. May be before 15 yrs back automobile like car was considered as luxury item only rich people used to buy it. But now, that concept have changed drastically, in this modern world automobile has become necessary thing and in a family each person will have there own vehicle. No one wants to depend on others. Not only in big cities or metropolitan cities but also in urban and rural areas this culture has developed.

In addition, every time automobile industry tries to invent new features, easy to operate the new technological changes in the interior of the four wheeler. For instance, nowadays cars have GPS features, Bluetooth helps to operate phone while driving, car backup camera, heated and adjustable seats and many more options can be seen in modern automobile advancement. Automobile industries are developing new features to help people for better commute.

Furthermore, nowadays, people can travel from one country to another within 24 hrs duration. Whereas, in early days people used to struggle to travel from one country to another, that too if there was any emergency. For instance, my grandmother used to tell me, in their days it was very difficult to go to hospital during emergency. They used travel hrs together by bullock cart.

Moreover, in this modern world, people can not wait for few secs if it is late, they want to travel fast. For instance, if a marketing person wants to advertise his products or need to sign a deal, he should be on time to do all these work. So for him, to get faster to the place is more beneficial to get profit in his business. Automobile has become convenient means of transportation.

In short, automobile have definitely changed our lives and also part of our lives. Job has become very easy because of faster travel. Automobile industries are working hard to fulfill human beings desires, by flying on the air like a bird and reach the place sooner.

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