Agree or disagree with bellow statement, in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

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Agree or disagree with bellow statement, in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

The issue at hand is whether there are more cars in use than before or not. This issue is very obvious because we can observe the influence of more uses cars in our towns and cities. Personally, I agree with the idea that

in twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. First reason that I think there are more cars in use today is because of the roads and highways in today towns. When there are more cars in use so this need more way for moving because of this we can see more big highway in today city. Because of today's car ways, I think that it must be more cars in use than before.

Additionally, it must be more cars in use because of more car pollutions in today cities. In the twenty years there are fewer car pollutions such as; there was less air pollutions, there was less cars trash in out of towns. Base on these details, I think there must be more cars in use than in twenty years.

Another reason that I think today it must be more car in use, is because there are a lot of car companies that product more cars. There is a direct relation between cars and Cars Company. If there are fewer cars in use, it must be fewer cars company because there is not affordable for Cars Company to produce cars when there are fewer requests.

Ultimately, I feel that it must be fewer cars in use in twenty years. I believe this because today there are more car pollutions and car ways

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A lot of repetitive words should be removed, like 'I think'.

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Average Word Length: 4.092 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.962 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 47 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.163 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.517 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.274 0.07