Can new technologies help students

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Can new technologies help students?

With the technological improvements, there have been great changes in our lives. We use technology in our daily lives, at work or at school. Some people says that, technology make our life easier, while others think that our lives were better before the advance technology. I definitely think that technology helps everyone in a different way and I think students should appreciate technology more than any other people. I shall explain in the following paragraphs.

First of all, education is a process of learning. In order to be successful, all of the students should study, read, make researches. Before technology, people used to make researches at libraries. Some schools have great libraries, but some schools don’t have enough documents. Also, people were spent a lot of time in order to find the right paper. But now, thanks to computers, people don’t have to go to libraries. They can reach almost all of the documents from their computers for free or just a little amount of money. So, It saves their times a lot

Second thing is communication. Know, there are some programs such as Skype, and people could communicate each other with these programs. For students, it is a great innovation. Now, students don’t have to go to the school. They can make online classes and hey can schedule their own programs. Also, this means, a student can take online courses and improve himself at home. For instance, I wanted to learn French, but courses were too expensive and I didn’t have any time to go there. So, I bought an online French course and learn French at home.

Some people asserts that, technology effects students life negatively, because they think that students waste their time while playing games or talking with their friend for hours and they don’t study enough for their classes. It is true that some student’s don’t work hard enough for their classes, but this is not about technology. Before technology students couldn’t play video games but they played with their toys, or friends.

To sum up, I definitely think that technology helps students. They can make researches, online classes from home and nobody can blame technology for the lazy students. Technology helps students to save their time and money.

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Sentence: Some people asserts that, technology effects students life negatively, because they think that students waste their time while playing games or talking with their friend for hours and they don't study enough for their classes.
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