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CHACO CANYON- INTEGRATED ESSAY
The reading passage discusses the settlement in the Chaco Canyon by discussing the three theories to support the ideas of archeologists. However, the pofessor casts serious doubts on the ideas mentioned in the reading passage based on the evidences those are found in the Chaco Canyon.
First of all, the professor discards the theory of residential use of the Chaco Canyon, as the evidences from the site shows that there are very few fire places to support hundreds of families those could be accomodated in that place.
Secondly, according to the professor the next theory that supports t...
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Sentence: If so, it would have been stored in big containers which is not true as per the evidences.
Description: The fragment big containers which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
Sentence: However, the pofessor casts serious doubts on the ideas mentioned in the reading passage based on the evidences those are found in the Chaco Canyon.
Error: pofessor Suggestion: professor
Sentence: First of all, the professor discards the theory of residential use of the Chaco Canyon, as the evidences from the site shows that there are very few fire places to support hundreds of families those could be accomodated in that place.
Error: accomodated Suggestion: accommodated
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
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