Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people s lives 1 Automobiles 2 Bicycles 3 AirplanesUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer

All types of transportation like automobile, bicycles and airplanes have changed human's life in ab unimaginable way. Invention on transportation system is never ending, humans invent and improve new things everyday. Nowadays, no need to wait for hours together to reach a certain place. I believe automobile transportation have changed people's lives. Automobile industry has rapidly developed since last century. Here are some reasons and examples.

First of all, automobile is very convenient to travel from place to place. Nowadays, in a family all most all have cars or there will be at-least two cars in a family. For example, to drop and pick up children from school is so convenient for parents, to do shopping and to load shopping items, commute to work and so on. People are totally depended on automobiles. Even for short distance people take their car.

In addition, traveling long distance with families and friends is such a fun thing. All can go to trip or picnic with close ones. Exploring new places and advantage of car is we can stop anywhere we want. Cars made people to travel easier in this world. Moreover, having a car has increased people's society status. Nowadays, people respect you if you have a car.

Furthermore, in beginning cars was considered to be luxury thing but now it is necessary to all people. And also automobile has become cheaper when compared to earlier period. Automobile has not only become cheaper but also it has all convenient features such as temperature of the car can be changed with a touch of a button, back up camera, heated seats when weather is cold. So all these attract people to buy cars. For instance, in India nano car has become so popular and cheaper when compared to other cars, so my friend's father has gifted her a nano car to commute to her work, which is safe and easy to go.

In conclusion, automobile has changed people's lives by making easier and faster to travel short or long distance. Car has become necessary to people.

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