college years are best time in persons life.Do u agree or disagree with the statement. Explain

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college years are best time in persons life.Do u agree or disagree with the statement. Explain

It is very exciting for every student to enter into a college after completion of high school. Everyone has their own imaginations about college before joining. But before leaving college everyone thinks that those days are the best moments of their life. I agree with the statement and i have many reasons to hold that opinion.

College is the place where we enter into a new world. It helps us to learn more. It not only teaches subject knowledge but also lessons in life. It teaches us the behavior, qualities to become a successful person. College life teaches what is good and what is bad. In this stage only we will realize about future. For example, in my school i was not dreamed about goals and future. But after my college i become more particular about my future and career.

College days are more enjoyable. There is new introductions of new people. we will get more people to do friendship. Tours, college programs, annual day functions, movies everything is enjoyable. Life with best friends gives happiest and most memorable moments. For example, in my college days we went to vizag with my friends. We went to beaches and temples.

College days experiences helps us to face bad and difficult situations in life. For example, when we are in college one of my friend was dead due to over speed on bike and also he drunk on that day. That was a bad situation we never expected. It makes us to realize not to drunk and drive. From that day we are going slowly on bikes.

Friends are really helpful during studies. Seniors will help us a lot during exams. They guide and support us when we are in problems. College days are helped me to how to concern with old and poor people. For example, in my college we organized a trust named " swara charitable trust ". We used to collect money every month and spend that money on needs of poor children to study. That gave me more satisfaction.

To conclude, college days are ever best in every ones life because they teaches everything. That days gives sweet and cute memories in our life.

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