Countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage other countries.

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Countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage other countries.

Today, countries consider as a repository of problems like violence, scams, scandals, racism etc. which affects their development adversely. And the reason behind all of these problems is isolation of countries. Disputes between countries always leads to disturbances between relations of countries. It is very important to have unity otherwise differences always lead to the creation of problems.

Country should always try to make the relationship rather than considering of isolation. Unity or co-operation always remains the backbone of a country. If countries have unity between each other then it is difficult for anyone to disturb there foundation. Unity always leads to the establishment of power. If some people or countries had unity between each other then they will always remain in power. For anyone, country or human being, it is required to remain in power because today, for the survival, there are two things which needed mostly: money or power. If someone has power only then s/he can survive, for which cooperation is critically important.

In addition to it, if countries had better relations between each other then it is easy for them to bypass hurdles or impediments. There are different hurdles, need to be bypass multiple times with proper understanding because one negative decision, will affect the whole country in an incongruent manner. Consider if a person has to take some career related decision then s/he consults other people multiple times. In the same way, if a country is taking some decision then there could be a possibility that its repercussions change the life of people for which consultation is required. This is the hurdle for a country which has to pass safely because a wrong decision will have a deleterious effect on the nation.

Furthermore, for a country to be peaceful it is required to have a sense of cooperation or understanding. If co-operation does not exist then disturbances like bomb blasts, riots etc. occur. The major problem behind these disturbances is racism which occurs due to lack of unity. If country remains secluded then it is considered as a group, which was treated as an alien to other countries which ultimately leads to the formation of majority or minority groups. When these secluded countries interfere in decisions to show their importance, they treated as invaders and riots start automatically. But if unity is there between different countries then each and every people considered at equal level and country remain peaceful.

It is required for countries to have good relations as isolations always create disturbances which lead to the occurrence of notorious activities. A peaceful country is one having aesthetic beauty, obedience, power and development the formation of which can only occur if countries have better relations and sense of cooperation between each other.

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flaws:
The content for reason 1 and reason 2 are not exactly right on the topic. Well, the reason 3 is ok.

Look, this essay is a good example why you got much less marks than expected in GRE test. From the language of the essay, you can get 27 in 30, but from the content and examples, you may get only 21 in 30.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: ? in 30
Category: ? Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 459 350
No. of Characters: 2352 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.629 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.124 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.838 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 131 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.528 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.458 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.126 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Can you please tell me the difference between toefl independent essay and gre issue essay.
Can we insert live examples in toefl essay as same as we write in gre issue essay. For eg.
if I write this essay according to gre pattern then various examples of relations can be included like USA Russia(due to snowden), or Pakistan and India. So in the same way just tell me can I add these type of examples is toefl essay's.
Please tell me one thing more, as you've written "The content for reason 1 and reason 2 are not exactly right on the topic" so can you please tell how these examples are deviating from the topic because I'm unable to figure it out.

Well, the truth is:

In TOEFL essays, you need to put more specific examples like you write GRE essays;

While in GRE essays, you need to talk generally like in this TOEFL essay.

The reason is that TOEFL test is for high school students who are ready for colleges, but GRE test is for graduate students. Putting specific examples is much easier than generally talking.

You are not completely wrong, but not on the right track. Read essays by top GRE users and check out their write styles:
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Regarding the reason 1 and reason 2, let's wait and see how other users will discuss.