Do you agree or dısagree with the followıng statement?
Readıng fıctıon(such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies.
Use spesific reasons and examples to explain your posıtıon.
While some people like reading fiction such as novels and short stories,others enjoy watching movies.This situation change from person to person and depend on person's characteristics.I strongly disagree that watching movies is more enjoyable than reading fiction.
First of all, when i read novels and short stories, i can be bored and can not focus on fictions and events about books. For instance, when i start these books,within the time i can lose my concentration and i can not understand events and characters exactly about novels and shorts stories. Also i can not fully dominated subject of these books. These situations affect me negatively and as a result of these conditions, i can not focus on the books and i can be bored.However, while i watch movies from television or computer, i can focus on easily and comfortably. Because i can adapt everything such as events and characters about movies. So, i can understand the subject of the movies and i can not be bored.
Seconly,while i read novels and stories, i can not imagine events and characters. So, i can not conceive many things and i can not recognize relations between events and people. Nevertheless, while i watch movies, i do not need to imagine and i can become aware of connections between events and characters.
Thirdly,some people think that reading fiction such as novels and short stories is more enjoyable than watching movies. Because they can like to read these books by imagining and they want to create something their own mind about these books. However,i can not conceive. Therefore,these books can not be understandable for me.
In brief, when everything is taken into consideration, we see that watching movies are more enjoyable than reading fiction because of losing of concentration and not being able to conceive
Sentence: For instance, when i start these books,within the time i can lose my concentration and i can not understand events and characters exactly about novels and shorts stories.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to shorts and stories
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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