Do you agree or disagree with the fallowing statement ? "One should never judge a person by external appearances "

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Do you agree or disagree with the fallowing statement ?

"One should never judge a person by external appearances "

I strongly believe that one should never judge a person by external appearances. I defend my point of view about this subject by giving two important reasons ; people cannot decide their external appearances and it depends on financial income. I will try to explain my reasons below.

To begin with, people's appearances do not belong their will. To illustrate this reason with an example, there are many people who are overweight and also weak. Thus, their appearances are not good enough. It is important that they already know their bad appearances. So, people should not judge them because of their appearances.

The second reason is that external appearance depends on money. Let me explain to you this reason with an example, there are some people who can buy expensive and qualified clothes. Because of their good clothes, their external appearances become better than the others who cannot afford expensive clothes. Hence, if people wear quality clothes, they have good appearances. In brief, because of lower financial income, people cannot have a good appearances.

On the other hand, some people claim that people can judge a person by external appearances because of the fact that if the person has not a good appearance, he or she becomes less valuable person than the others. I strongly oppose this understanding. If a person cannot afford expensive clothes and he or she is a person who overweight or weak, how can you expect this person to have a good appearance ? These things do not permit to judge a person.

To put it in a nutshell, people cannot decide their external appearances and it depends on financial income are the reasons why I support that one should never judge a person by external appearances. I am of the opinion that, external appearance does not allow judging a person.

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Sentence: If a person cannot afford expensive clothes and he or she is a person who overweight or weak, how can you expect this person to have a good appearance ?
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by an adjective
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