Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
We people are a kind of animal if we category with really detail that divided all animal existed on earth into separated group. That is to say, we get a sense as wild as the other animals across the world, which, for instance, we like to interact with many other same specious altogether, participate into some sort of activities that might have tens of thousands of others. With the matter of this fact, I deeply believe that attending a live performance could generate our happiness and increase the satisfaction greatly.
First of all, the atmosphere at the live occasion, such as basketball gam...
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Sentence: For instance, a music concert with lots of different installment that compose a fascinating harmony with pleasant and percussion which directly penetrate through your heart can provide a feeling which you can't even perceive the least while you are listening the recorded CD.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace installment with installments
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