Do you agree or disagree with the following statement-
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
What is Friendship? There are many correct answers to this question. I think, Friendship is a feeling of comfort and emotional safety with a person. Many qualities are necessary for a good friendship, including honesty, trustworthiness, loyalty and unconditional acceptance I pretty much agree with a popular saying, “Old is Gold”. When it comes to selecting between keeping old friends or making new friends, preserving your old friendship is more important. With the passage of time we develop a compatibility and trustworthiness with our friends. These properties make a relationship stronger...
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