Do you agree or disagree with the following statement that movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished?
No one can avoid being influenced by multi-media. Much as us may pride ourselves on our accurate judgment, but we are no longer free to tell the right from the wrong, for the televisions and movies exert a huge influence on us. It seems that media today presents an constant pattern that bad guys will always be punished and good men will definitely be rewarded. In reality, however, things may be different and I would explore only two primary ones here.
The main reason for my propensity is that in real world, people are motivated by kindness, and expect nothing in return. However, movies and ...
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Sentence: Much as us may pride ourselves on our accurate judgment, but we are no longer free to tell the right from the wrong, for the televisions and movies exert a huge influence on us.
Description: The word pride is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to pride
Sentence: As you can see, if the musical attaches more attention to the part of jail, audiences may come to persuade themselves that it is not worthwhile to take such a risk even it is for other's own good.
Description: The word musical is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to musical
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