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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer


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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Teachers have a great influence on their students, this is an undeniable truth. But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers. In my point of view, Parents have far more influence on their children. The reasons why I think that way goes as follows.

First of all, Parents give us life, they know our merits and demerits.They know us like a book, how we act, react to situations, what do we like, dislike. Since they know you well, it’s much more easier to teach something. Because they can choose an alternate ways of teaching which we can easily understand.

Another reason for my attitude is that the reasearche ...

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Sentence: But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers.
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Suggestion: Refer to for and meet

Sentence: Another reason for my attitude is that the reasearcher's approve that many of the basic manners which adapts us to society, is learned in the early infanthood.
Description: A noun, singular, common, genitive is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to reasearcher's and approve

Sentence: Parents prepare us to society by teaching the basic manners which is mostly will be our permanent characteristics.
Description: The fragment basic manners which is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are

Sentence: But when the individuals for meet their teachers, Most of their character are already moulded by their life givers.
Error: moulded Suggestion: molded

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