Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
An appearance is an important part of our life. We wear different cloth for various situation, and people will behave with us depend on our clothes of course we behave with people depend on their clothes. Some people believe that clothes influence the way people behave, others would disagree. In my view, different clothes influence the way people behave for two important reasons.
The main reason is that behavior is changing depend on our clothes and situation. Characteristic, color and style of clothes influence our behavior. For example, when I go to work I am always wear formal clothes, because I want to be serious in office more than normal. Also when I wear formal clothes other colleague behave me more formal than when I wear casual clothes. Moreover, When you go to playing game or travelling you wear sport clothes, such as t-shirt and jeans because of you want have become relax and not serious such as formal clothes. Or another example about situation is one of my friends like to pretend to rich, consequently, she wear clothes specific for rich people.
Another reason for my opinion is that color of clothes might be influence our behavior. For instance, when I go to parties or playing game I wear warm and cold color clothes that suitable for parties or playing, and when I go to that place I am very happy, and energized. Also I read an article when I prepared for TOEFL exam that states that colors can influence our behavior. This experience taught me that choosing colors to wear are very important to improve our passionate.
In sum, some people think that different clothes influence the behavior that we have with others and behaviors that others have with me.
behavior is changing depend on our clothes and situation.
behavior is changing which depends on our clothes and situation.
Also when I wear formal clothes other colleague behave me more formal
Also when I wear formal clothes, other colleagues behave me more formal
Sentence: Moreover, When you go to playing game or travelling you wear sport clothes, such as t-shirt and jeans because of you want have become relax and not serious such as formal clothes.
Description: A verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to want and have
Sentence: Or another example about situation is one of my friends like to pretend to rich, consequently, she wear clothes specific for rich people.
Description: The fragment she wear clothes is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace wear with verb, past tense
Sentence: Another reason for my opinion is that color of clothes might be influence our behavior.
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Suggestion: Refer to influence and our
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