I certainly believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. So many things have changed and evolved to promote an absolute better life on different aspects.
First of all, health wise, medical services and accomplishments today have promply evolved to a greater extent. Longevity of human beings is a virtual evidence. Now a days people could overcome so many deseases that were considered fatal, at the time when our grandparents were still children. New medicines as well as medicinal equipments were invented since then. Therefore magnifice...
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Sentence: First of all, health wise, medical services and accomplishments today have promply evolved to a greater extent.
Error: promply Suggestion: promptly
Sentence: Now a days people could overcome so many deseases that were considered fatal, at the time when our grandparents were still children.
Error: deseases Suggestion: diseases
Sentence: The invention of the internet has indeed fascilated so many issues.
Error: fascilated Suggestion: fascinated
Sentence: This way the students could learm more material at a lesser time.
Error: learm Suggestion: learn
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 228 200
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Average Word Length: 5.072 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 10.705 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.469 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.062 0.07
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