If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reason and example to support your choice?

Submitted by visa0809 on Sat, 12/07/2013 - 22:20

If given an opportunity to travel back in time, I'll want to meet Mahatma Gandhi without any second thought. As He is one of the key personalities among the great souls who bring the independence to India. He is an inspiration not only for me but also for millions of others through out the world. Also there are many other freedom fighter whom I admire a lot but in case of meeting one of them I'll definitely choose Mahatma Gandhi for reasons like his virtue of sticking with the truth, Love for his motherland and persuasive nature. Which I'll explore further.

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