Integrated Writing-TPO 26

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Integrated Writing-TPO 26

The professor discuses that we can control the zebra mussels' population and it is not proven that the spread of this kind of shellfish can be a danger for fishes. The information he provides is in direct contrast to facts outlined in reading.

The lecturer mentions that it was impossible for unknowledgeable people in the past to prevent the transportation of zebra mussels. However, nowadays there are more effective methods. In fact, ships take on fresh water from Europe and carry it to North America and it this way, the shellfishes transport to America. Therefore, if ships take on ...

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Sentence: In fact, ships take on fresh water from Europe and carry it to North America and it this way, the shellfishes transport to America.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to it and this

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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 12
No. of Words: 237 250
No. of Characters: 1146 1200
No. of Different Words: 128 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.924 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.607 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 64 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.287 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4