It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

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It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

Although a lot of people optimistically believe that building of new high school will be beneficial for dwellers of an area, it seems to me that such condition will overshadow governed peace in that area due to shattering too much noise generated by boys and girls in their spare times and producing other troublesome by them on which next paragraphs will elaborate.

To begin with, dwellers of a region sometimes have to move as the result of building a new school in their neighborhood. They have various reasons for such decision. Either they exhausted by too much noise generated in pupil's leisure times, or they have some difficulties on account of too much commuting by parents. Fewer people are ready to accept such situation. For example, in one of my friend's house, there was a public school by just fifty students; however, if meanwhile just half of them embark on speak gently, sound of whose will be on the nerve. That aside, surrounding's populating take into account of serious vicissitudes faced with dwellers on which they suggest do not permit such plan.

Additionally, gathering boys and girls always followed by igniting dangerous behaviors. For an instance, sinister behaviors often occurs during period of high school, years between thirteen to seventeen year-old; not only are students responsible for most of problems, but bad companionship also surround pupils at these ages in which parents and dwellers are of people who are prone to their problem. Hence, clearly dwellers want to be away from perils rose from them. Had they do not persisted on rejecting new school's plane, they would have plagued by their perils.

All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, what plays a key role for people's nerve is maintaining the peace and security, one of which is vital and the other is imperative.

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they exhausted by too much noise
they are exhausted by too much noise

Sentence: For example, in one of my friend's house, there was a public school by just fifty students; however, if meanwhile just half of them embark on speak gently, sound of whose will be on the nerve.
Description: The token on is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to on and speak

Sentence: That aside, surrounding's populating take into account of serious vicissitudes faced with dwellers on which they suggest do not permit such plan.
Description: The fragment That aside , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace aside with adjective
Description: The fragment populating take into is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace take with verb, past participle

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