It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood Do you support or oppose this plan Why Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Neighborhood is a very important part of our lives. Some people may should spend more time at home, therefore neighborhood is one of the essential parts of every person life. If a new movie theater build in your neighborhood some persons support this plan, others would disagree. In my view, I oppose that a new movie theater may be built in our neighborhood for two important reasons.

The main reason is that new movie theater in our neighborhood is very noise and crowd. though, the new movie theater is very fun and entertainment for most of the people, but when people with their family and children want go to theater, they have to find place to park their cars. Therefore, there is not any place to park my car or neighborhood cars. Consequently, this people make very noise because they want happy time with their family. For example, one of my friends talk about new movie theater that built in her neighborhood, she explains that they don’t have a calm day when they are at home to rest, of course she is very angry that she couldn’t study with concentration because of noise of new theater in her neighborhood. As you can see, people that live in near the new movie theater doesn’t have any calm day when they stay at home.

Another reasons is that if instead of movie theater build other building such as library or other business is very helpful, particularly for people they live near library, also people have a place to study more and they encourage to study in public place such as library. For instance, there is a library near our neighborhood, most of the time I study in the library because this is very calm and silent place to study more. This experience taught me that some building such as library is very benefit for people that live near library.

In sum, though some may have a place to fun and happy and also another advantage for improve business but I oppose this plan. Not only will crowd and noise place for the people that live around new movie theater, but also they don’t have any place to park their cars and they don’t have a good and calm day when they stay at home. The library plan should better place in our neighborhood.

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Some people may should spend more time at home,
Some people may spend more time at home,

If a new movie theater build in your neighborhood
If a new movie theater is going to be built in your neighborhood

Sentence: Consequently, this people make very noise because they want happy time with their family.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and people

Another reasons is that if instead of movie theater build other building such as
Another reason is that if instead of movie theater build other buildings such as

This experience taught me that some building such as library is very benefit for people that live near library.
This experience taught me that some buildings such as library is very beneficial for people who live near to library.

Sentence: In sum, though some may have a place to fun and happy and also another advantage for improve business but I oppose this plan.
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Suggestion: Refer to for and improve

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