It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
A new restaurant in my neighborhood is always welcome because in that area where I live needs a good restaurant. Although, some restaurants do already exist farther from my locality, I believe it would be a great help for the residents if we can access good food within a walkable distance. Many people nearer to my house are working and very often they depend upon the food from reatsaurants due to their busy schedule. In addition, restaurant is a place where many people will visit to dine, hence it may help to boost the business of my neighborhood, as there is an art center that needs to be...
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Sentence: Many people nearer to my house are working and very often they depend upon the food from reatsaurants due to their busy schedule.
Error: reatsaurants Suggestion: restaurants
Sentence: It may make the area crowdy but the crowd is going to benefit the people of my locality.
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