It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

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It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

Friends are those who make our world. Without friends, one cannot imagine living in this competitive world. As the saying goes, 'A friend in need is a friend indeed'. Hence it is of ultimate importance to create a good circle of friends. At the same time, I do agree that, it is more important to keep our old friends than make new friends. Obviously, we have to expand our friends' circle. But that does not mean losing our old friends forever.

First of all, we need to build a long lasting relationship with our old friends. In that case, they...

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