Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

Neighbors are the people who live near us and they are very important part of our lives. Sometimes they are very important than our relatives such as aunt or cousin. I think that, every person in their life have an experience from had a good or bad neighbors. In my view, there are two important qualities that a good neighbor should have.

First, this is the calm and quiet quality, specific when there is a special situation. I think that in during the year, every person maybe celebrate a big party or birthday, therefore, the celebrant shouldn’t disturb another neighbors because of the party. For example, in last year I have an important exam that part of my future depends on, before night of exam, our neighbor had a big party, they made very noise in around our house, when I was in bed I could hear all of their music, clapping. they were very noisy. I had to awake tomorrow very soon, but I hadn’t good sleep last night because of party s neighbor. This is a bad night in our life that never I forget. Also I remember that another neighbor had a boy that, he was very sick, so he needs a rest, but when our environment is very noisy, we don’t have a good sleep. As you can see, calm and quiet is one of the important qualities of a good neighbor.

Second, aware and inform of greeting our neighbor not officiousness is another important characteristic for a good neighbor. This means that, when we go out of our home and we meet with our neighbors, this is better we had a greeting and inform that if are they fine and every thing about them is ok. Some neighbors when they meet each us, they ask a lot of question about our private issue. I think that it is very rude characteristic. For instance, one of my friend explains about one of their neighbors that, she is very rude and officious person, when they meet each other, she ask a lot of question of my friend that this is not her business. Every person has a private range, that we should not enter, but some people are very officious.

We can conclude that calm, quiet when we have a party and don’t officiousness are some qualities for a good neighbor.

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Sentence: First, this is the calm and quiet quality, specific when there is a special situation.
Description: The fragment , specific when is rare

Sentence: I think that in during the year, every person maybe celebrate a big party or birthday, therefore, the celebrant shouldn't disturb another neighbors because of the party.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to another and neighbors

Sentence: For instance, one of my friend explains about one of their neighbors that, she is very rude and officious person, when they meet each other, she ask a lot of question of my friend that this is not her business.
Description: The fragment she ask a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ask with verb, past tense

Sentence: We can conclude that calm, quiet when we have a party and don't officiousness are some qualities for a good neighbor.
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every person in their life have an experience from had a good or bad neighbors.
every person in their life has an experience from haing a good or bad neighbors.

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

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