Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In today’s society, by the day people needed to arrange their time more accurately. As the foods are much easier to prepare in the last decade, People want to use less time on preparing food in order to be more efficient in the work. This lead people to increased consumption of fast food or frozen food. However this has brought some many health problems. My arguments for this attitude listed as follows.

One of the primary reason for my propensity is that the consuming of fast food that much leads to some health problems such as obesity, heart problems and in the long term it may end up with cancer. Reasearcher’s say that the ingredients of that kind of foods are extremely dangerous for individual’s health and it shouldn’t be consumed constantly.

Futhermore, There had been an experiment on the crumpets which is used by a few of the most well-known fast food brands in the world. They put the crumpets and the breads which we use in daily life in a vase sealed tightly. In a few days later, common breads mildewed as expected but on the crumpets there was no symptom of corroding. Result of this experiment is that they use many carginogenic ingredients to keep the bread without corruption for a long time. And in the long term, these ingredients cause serious health problems.

Another fact for my attitude is that consuming them constantly, loads an undeniable burden to our economy too There is no denying fact that preparing food at home is much more healthy and cheaper. I admit that it may be difficult for some people to prepare their meal at home but I think it can be arranged or they may try to prepare practical and healthy solutions at home.

All in a word, We may save some serious time by consuming the fast foods or some unhealthy frozen foods. But in the end it will cause serious health problems and it is definetely not worth it

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Sentence: Reasearcher's say that the ingredients of that kind of foods are extremely dangerous for individual's health and it shouldn't be consumed constantly.
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Sentence: Result of this experiment is that they use many carginogenic ingredients to keep the bread without corruption for a long time.
Error: carginogenic Suggestion: carcinogenic

Sentence: But in the end it will cause serious health problems and it is definetely not worth it
Error: definetely Suggestion: definitely

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