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One of the most important things for everyone is his clothing. Each person’s clothing habits influenced by his age, social character, education, and job. Seemingly, dressing is crucial in people’s behavior, because it reminds person’s situation in certain time. Surely, I am positive with this statement due to several reasons, first, energy that people absorb in different clothing and second one is people reaction that effects on our behaviors.
Main reason that I believe effects on people’s manner when they wear different clothes is absorbing energy from that clothe. Each kind of clothe, I mean design or color, has special energy which is emitted by that clothe to person wearing that. This energy can change person’s mood and finally his behavior. For instance, wearing black reminds sadness and die, therefore while wearing black people become dejected and certainly change their manner. Thus, I believe dressing is important in human manner.
Another reason that I think why clothing effects on our behaviors is others reaction. Probably, everyone experienced different reactions in different styles. Doubtless, before starting to speak our clothes introduce us to others and it change their behavior finally effects on our feeling and behaves. For example, suppose you invited to a college party, if you wear such a formal suite, certainly your friends will be confuse and maybe ridicule you, if this reaction continues might you got angry. Therefore, I am convinced that, my behavior will change with my clothing habits.
In my opinion, clothing effects on peoples behaviors. Because it will changes the energy that we will absorb, in addition it changes others reaction and persons self mood. Thus, we should care about clothing more than past.
Sentence: Another reason that I think why clothing effects on our behaviors is others reaction.
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Sentence: Doubtless, before starting to speak our clothes introduce us to others and it change their behavior finally effects on our feeling and behaves.
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Sentence: In my opinion, clothing effects on peoples behaviors.
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Sentence: Because it will changes the energy that we will absorb, in addition it changes others reaction and persons self mood.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Different Words: 154 200
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Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 279 350
No. of Characters: 1436 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.087 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.147 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.407 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.412 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.515 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.706 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5