People may attend college or universities for many different reasons (for example new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge) why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reason or example to support your answer.

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People may attend college or universities for many different reasons (for example new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge) why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reason or example to support your answer.

Introduction-Education is considered the most valuable indicator of having good qualities to lead someone's life in better way.I think that many people may have different perspective to attend college or university. For me,Personally, I believe that people attend college or university for getting knowledge,enhancing skills, and pursuing their dreams on computer for their future life.

To begin with,I think that people attend college or university for getting knowledge in different areas.Some people like to gain knowledge on arts, some like to gain knowledge on science and other like to gain knowledge on management sector.When they get equipped in these areas, they lead their life successfully.By way of example, my brother has gained lots of knowledge in science after getting finished his degree on physics.

In addition to getting knowledge in different areas, people go to college or university for enhancing different technical skills.Some people like to become a doctor, some like to do engineering and other like to do nursing degree and want to serve people around the world. Even though, people have interest in different skills in different areas,I think that, their ultimate goal is to make life more better.Take an example for myself, because of having high demand of nursing job on the one hand and being useful in my daily life I chose nursing degree for my better future life.

Finally,along with getting knowledge and enhancing different skills, some people go to college to pursue computer skills and get degree for the betterment of their life in the future.We can imagine that people with no degree or having degree in less charming areas in the job market , they have to face difficulties to live prosperous life .Either they have to do very laborious job or they don't get good job opportunity to in their life.For example We can see around our neighbor.They always go to work to solve hand to mouth problem and bearly pay their apartment bill every month.They even have not get the time for their children's study and other recreational things in their life.

By way of conclusion, considering the issue of gaining knowledge on different ares, enhancing skill in varous technical fields and for pursuing computer skill and degree , I would have to say that, people attend college or university for gaining knowledge and enhancing different types of skills and pursuing computer master for improvement in their life.

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