Should children spend much time on sport

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Should children spend much time on sport

Some people hold the opinion that children spend much time on sport whereas many take the opposite views. As far as I am concerned, spending much time on sport is really vital for children for many aspects, such as phisical and mental health and cooperation soul.

To begin with, physical and mental health are very significant for children, in particular in early ages. Sport activities contribute to all children for having a healthy life. Take a jogging activity at the forest for example. The brain cells need oxygen and best way to get oxygen is jogging at the forest. Similarly, swiming provides children to get strong muscles, which help children to be distinguished in a society. Mental helath is bound to physical health, which means that if a child exert effort to deal with any physical problem we can not expect him/her to get excellent mental health. So, sport s activities help children to maintain high quality life style.

Last bu not least, cooperation helps children to achieve a lot of things in their life and collaberative activities are provided through many sports fields. The more the children take part in any sport activities, the more they learn how to dealth with any problem as a group. Football matches requried strong helping each other during the match. So, children are taught by the trainer how they help each other. This good habit is maintained by children in other situations in their life sice they practiced in advanced.

Taking into account all of these factors, we can reach the conlusion that if we want our children to be healthy and get collaborative awareness we encorage them to spend much time for sport activities since sport can provide all we expect.

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Sentence: Mental helath is bound to physical health, which means that if a child exert effort to deal with any physical problem we can not expect him/her to get excellent mental health.
Description: The fragment child exert effort is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace exert with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular

Sentence: This good habit is maintained by children in other situations in their life sice they practiced in advanced.
Description: The fragment they practiced in is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace practiced with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive

Sentence: As far as I am concerned, spending much time on sport is really vital for children for many aspects, such as phisical and mental health and cooperation soul.
Error: phisical Suggestion: physical

Sentence: Similarly, swiming provides children to get strong muscles, which help children to be distinguished in a society.
Error: swiming Suggestion: swimming

Sentence: Mental helath is bound to physical health, which means that if a child exert effort to deal with any physical problem we can not expect him/her to get excellent mental health.
Error: helath Suggestion: health

Sentence: Last bu not least, cooperation helps children to achieve a lot of things in their life and collaberative activities are provided through many sports fields.
Error: collaberative Suggestion: collaborative

Sentence: This good habit is maintained by children in other situations in their life sice they practiced in advanced.
Error: sice Suggestion: since

Sentence: Taking into account all of these factors, we can reach the conlusion that if we want our children to be healthy and get collaborative awareness we encorage them to spend much time for sport activities since sport can provide all we expect.
Error: encorage Suggestion: encourage
Error: conlusion Suggestion: conclusion

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