Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer - items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your
choice.
Some items made with hand while another with machine and some item can made up by hand as well as machine. I like to prefer items made by hand as well as by machine. My choice depend on item type. If the items related to food items then I really like to prefer hand made item. Hand made food items more teasty and fresh.But some items like furnitures and any other home accessories made up with machine are very good in quality. They are durable than hand made item.
Machine made item have some advantages over hand made item . First of all the machine made items have better quality than hand made item. To make that items engineers desinged the machines very carefully and systematically. So there is no chance of making damge items. As the machine produce more items at time so that cost of production is less than the cost of production of the hand made item. As machine made item produce in large quantity so that it easly available in the market. We can also get the more variations in that items. Such like cloths which are availble in differnet size,colors and designs with better quality and durabilty.
However, Some hand made item are also as good as machine made items. Such like hand made sari ,hand made food, hand made jellary.As it made by hand so each and every part is made up with very carefully. To make these items we need much more silk like making the mud vessel with different type of shape. This type of work is only done by the silkful worker. They are also durable. But some items made by hand are not provide that much of variations in the items. They lose their quality as compare to machine made . such like furnitures. we can get more stylish and comfortable furnitures which are made up with machines than hand.
In the end I really like to give my preference to both choice because it totally depends up on which item you like to purchase.
Sentence: Some items made with hand while another with machine and some item can made up by hand as well as machine.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to can and made
Sentence: My choice depend on item type.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace depend with verb, past participle
Sentence: As the machine produce more items at time so that cost of production is less than the cost of production of the hand made item.
Description: The fragment machine produce more is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace produce with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: They lose their quality as compare to machine made . such like furnitures. we can get more stylish and comfortable furnitures which are made up with machines than hand.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to as and compare
Sentence: Hand made food items more teasty and fresh.But some items like furnitures and any other home accessories made up with machine are very good in quality.
Error: teasty Suggestion: ?
Sentence: To make that items engineers desinged the machines very carefully and systematically.
Error: desinged Suggestion: designed
Sentence: So there is no chance of making damge items.
Error: damge Suggestion: damage
Sentence: As machine made item produce in large quantity so that it easly available in the market.
Error: easly Suggestion: early
Sentence: Such like cloths which are availble in differnet size,colors and designs with better quality and durabilty.
Error: durabilty Suggestion: durability
Error: differnet Suggestion: different
Error: availble Suggestion: available
Sentence: This type of work is only done by the silkful worker.
Error: silkful Suggestion: skillful
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
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Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree.
Para 2:First,reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 2 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3:Second,reason 2 ,blabla... do the same thing like First
Para 4:Third, reason 3 blabla... do the same thing like First but shorter
Para 5: Conclusion.
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Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 346 350
No. of Characters: 1496 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.313 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.324 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.054 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 73 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 55 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.727 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.199 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5