Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather on climate all year long Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather on climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples.

Some people choose to stay in places with the homogeneous weather in a year because they feel comfortable with it. Personally I prefer to live in a country that has four seasons in a year. I will explain my reason in the following paragraph.

I think that a country that has several seasons in a year is interesting because we can see the transitions of weathers after months. Therefore, there are variations of views that we can see when it changes. For instance, countries with four seasons that consist of spring, summer, autumn and winter. Every spring, the scenery always green and the flowers are blossom. Summer is come after spring and bring hot temperature that can make leaves are yellowish. Therefore, autumn is the time when the leaves are gold, brown, yellow, and red. After autumn is winter. In this time, the scenery is always white because snow is covering every place. Thus, scenery in the country which has numerous seasons is always fascinating.

Furthermore, the variation of fashion in four season country is admiring because there are exchanging mode of trend in every season. For instance, in the winter, we can use long coat, heavy scarf and ear cover with thick material. Furthermore, in summer when the temperature is high we use slight garment. Thus, we can change our style of fashion in every season.

However, some people prefer to live in a place that has a season every year because they cannot deal with transition of temperature and weather. For instance, they cannot face the chill temperature in winter that can become hot when summer. Therefore, the reason of people who live in a country with same weather in a year is the transition of temperature.

To sum up, although many people prefer to stay in a place with same weather, I would rather living in a country that has several seasons in a year.

Votes
Average: 8.6 (8 votes)
Essay Categories

Comments

flaws:
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.9 21.0

Read essays by top users:
http://www.testbig.com/users/vanan
http://www.testbig.com/users/ariana2811
http://www.testbig.com/users/lauren

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 318 350
No. of Characters: 1473 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.223 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.632 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.443 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.839 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5