some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice

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some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice

People prefer to live in a place which makes them feel comfortable and happy. many factors are considered when deciding about a place where to live . I will chose place with variations in climate year long. I will give two primary reasons to support my preference to this

First reason, why I prefer is the experience of all types of weather like hot, chill and rain at a place. I have a friend who lives in Saudi Arabia which is a tropical area and is hot most of the year so he has never seen snow. Whenever I say about snow at my place, he wishes if he could see once. So I invited him to place where i live in winter i still remember the joy in his face playing in the snow he was thrilled that he saw snow.

The other would be having a chance to wear different outfit, I have one of my relative who live at a place where it is cool most of the time. So they have to always cover their body to overcome that climate whenever I send my pictures in dresses without wearing coats during the summer, she feels sad that she doesn’t have such dry conditions there.

So considering the above reasons, primarily about cherishing different climates at a same place and also opportunity to use different types of clothes I like to live in a place with altering weather conditions year long.

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