Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors. Other people prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Would you prefer to be outside, or would you prefer to be inside for your leisure activities? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
Leisure time is meant to be used fruitfully. "Winners don't do different things; they do things differently" goes a saying. For people to be successful, time management is of utmost importance. Each and every second is precious and so, leisure time must be effectively utilized to make the most out of the available free time. Given lots of leisure time, I would prefer to spend them outside rather than being locked up indoors. Going out and mingling with people gives lots of advantages over time spent indoors.
First of all, people get more physical activit...
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