Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reason and example to support your answer.
In my opinion computers have made our life easier and more convenient rather than making it complex and stressful. From my personal experience computer make my life easier in many ways:
First of all, by using computer I can save a lot of books or photos now, and they don't take a lot of place as in the past. For example, when I was child, at that time we didn't have computer, so all the picture I took was put in the album. While now I can collect thousand of picture only in a small folder and doesn't require a lot of space, and that is also true for books.
In addition, in my work I benefited a lot of computer which make the student understand better the subject. For instance, in my lecture I use computer for in most of the lecture, and I can show them more example and give them more explanation by showing picture or drawing which is major part of our college's subject.
The last benefit among thousand of benefits of computer which make our life easier is using computer for internet. By using computer now I can send any mail in a minute, while in the past it took a lot of time to sent any email.
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Sentence: The last benefit among thousand of benefits of computer which make our life easier is using computer for internet.
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