Some people think that we learn our most important lessons in school. Others think that the knowledge we acquire outside of school is the most important. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some people think that we learn our most important lessons in school. Others think that the knowledge we acquire outside of school is the most important. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Knowledge is basic education that people need to improve their skill and performance. Some people might say that “knowledge comes from experienced and expert”. One person who has that is called teacher, who always teach students in school. Thus, I agree with statement that the great point to learn comes from school, the best place.

In my view, school describes place where student obtain fundamental knowledge to study. The beginning of their skill appear at school. Students learn from zero become expert. In school, they find out the essential subject which is used for their future occupation. They study all of subjects and take one subject as their preference. So, all of academics are learned in that place.

Beside academic skill, they try to develop their own ability like communicate with other students. They join in social community, get some extra curriculum for sport subject, and take some courses like computer skill. All of this can be useful while they try to get job because many company have require soft skill and unique point for each person. In addition, sometimes school have competition among others, it means students improve their personality becomes more better. They know the way to compete sportively.

Moreover, some schools provide facilities for practicing and exercising without an extra paying. While other schools give free tuition fee and include facilities that can be used every time. It means that parents who has less fund can let their children to join. It becomes chance for developing students’ ability. They can spend their entire time on weekend effectively, no more playing games or watching movies. Practicing many sports, playing violin with their community, do research in laboratory, and others.

To recap, I personally follow the statement that school becomes the best place to study, both academic and non academic performance. No other place is better than school.

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Sentence: All of this can be useful while they try to get job because many company have require soft skill and unique point for each person.
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Sentence: it means students improve their personality becomes more better.
Suggestion: it means students improve their personality becomes much better.

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